Black and fab. 23. Libra. ENFJ.
Bay Area. UC Berkeley Grad: Media Studies.
Writer, artist, illustrator, producer, critic, Disney Princessologist.
Benevolent Media Proprietor in training.
It's also my business standard.
SOMEONE GIVE THIS PERSON A GOLD STAR.
Honestly? I think it’s a bit of a tawdry, cliched, overdone soap opera story line. But the art is pretty.
So much of it just seems out of character and unnecessary. And I’m even basing this on the assumption that it will turn out that Ozai is Zuko’s father; if that’s untrue, then everything is outright laughable and takes away so much from the story line you created in the original series. It would be much more interesting if you gave Ozai some complexity and depth and not focused so much on some former love of Ursa’s. That sort of love triangle really is better suited to a soap opera, where it’s been done a thousand times over by now.
Or, even better, and even more interestingly, focus on what happened to Ursa over the intervening years; if she is still alive, she must have a fascinating story. The focus on romance? Yawn.